tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7915678377561307002.post4214057764559696788..comments2016-04-18T23:15:53.249-07:00Comments on Ben Williams: Suspiria, 1977, Review.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08210211500418497287noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7915678377561307002.post-69661944496686410222015-12-03T22:29:30.306-08:002015-12-03T22:29:30.306-08:00Hi Ben,
Wow, that was quite a negative review! I&...Hi Ben,<br /><br />Wow, that was quite a negative review! I'm not sure if that was because you absolutely hated the film, or if you were trying to get another point across... Anyway, which ever is the case, for the purposes of these reviews, you should really try and focus on the aspects of the film that are interesting and useful in relation to your current project. You have discussed the lighting, colour and sound which is good, but all the good stuff is overshadowed by the strong negative tone that you have written in. You can still include the negative, but if you word it slightly differently. it puts the emphasis back on the more interesting aspects. So for example, instead of saying that the story had no storyline and character development as if that us a bad thing, you can make it so that this is the very thing that gives the film its mystery. So for example,<br /><br />'The very lack of an apparent storyline and minimal character development, both add to the mystery of the film...'<br /><br />Don't forget that you also need at least 3 quotes from different sources to support your writing; in this case, you may have found that by looking at some different sources, you may have found a way to give a more balanced voice to your review.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com